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Doubt

He has excited
green eyes,
walks chin out,
air in his hair
and on his face
so that he cries
just a little,
the wind in his eyes.
He walked past
a beggar the last
day and blustered
not today, please,
not today

and he felt odd,
lonely, I think,
though he had me,
as if opportunity
was someone
he missed too,
at the station,
leaving.
©2007-2009 ~Boogster
:iconboogster:

Author's Comments

Yes. It's a draft. I'm fairly sure it's too insubstantial and needs thinking on.

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It's wonderful, draft or no.

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